uh... re-visit the deviation page [link] and just under the picture before the comments start, there should be a box click on the button that says "write critique"
not all deviations request critiques, and only premium members can ask for critique but you do not require premium membership to write a critique
XD it's okay, dA is rather tricky to navigate when you start, but you'll learn to love it
it looks to me that because of your angle you will need to draw a bit more of the other side of the face. This is the closest I could find to your picture
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